Lv functions edits1
Thank you for this initial draft!
Here are some global comments:
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I love the first part but I think it would be great to make it visual (either you already have some idea for a graphic design, or I can help you with it using powerpoint/photoshop). Paragraphs that could use illustration are indicated in my Rmd with an @ILLUSTRATE
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several typos (but this is why you have a reviewer, to catch them!)